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« on: March 14, 2008, 05:04:28 PM »


Advice and stuff, I kinda just drew what I felt and shit.

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« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2008, 05:10:00 PM »
Go wilder, fuck things up more.

Also, put some more detail into it, the flat and large chunks of color just look bad.

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« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2008, 05:20:31 PM »
Quote from: Misanthrope Antelope;1253670
Go wilder, fuck things up more.

Also, put some more detail into it, the flat and large chunks of color just look bad.

Alright, I'll keep that in mind, thanks mang.

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« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2008, 05:12:04 AM »
There's a lot of dripping imagery in this picture, but there's also a lot of sharp edges. This would work well if it was a little more symmetrical, or if it blended evenly from drippy to spiky, but there doesn't seem to be any kind of flow to it. Your eyes don't really know where to look.

I like the contrast of the second flower with the background, but the first blends in a little too much to be effective. The floating-petals thing looks pretty neat too.

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« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2008, 09:40:59 AM »
Take off the softened fill edges, these things work best all sharp-contrast.