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Quote from: MightyBooshClock;1932874Sayed
what do you mean by sayed?
But really, that was just terrible. No coherent plot, bad grammar... Just... It was like trying to read the imagination of a mentally I'm a edgy teen person. I wouldn't have been surprised if you had originally written it on the back of a coloring book with crayon.
That was not good dude.
Adriboosh.. the last time you belittled the Alphaman you spent a month sleeping with bacon. How about presenting your feedback in a more productive tone, dude?
Quote from: pop-tart;1932886Adriboosh.. the last time you belittled the Alphaman you spent a month sleeping with bacon. How about presenting your feedback in a more productive tone, dude?
:this:
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Quote from: MightyBooshClock;1932878But really, that was just terrible. No coherent plot, bad grammar... Just... It was like trying to read the imagination of a mentally I'm a edgy teen person. I wouldn't have been surprised if you had originally written it on the back of a coloring book with crayon.
That was not good dude.
Thanks. I will work on my grammar, if my mind doesn't tell me to not add commas!
Don't thank Fauxblob. He's not being helpful.
Your spelling and structure will get better as you get older. Overall, this shows a lot of creativity & imagination and that's more important.
I think this story would be a great Flash movie actually. It's like a big acid trip. People turning into cookies and clouds and shit. That's dope.
Quote from: pop-tart;1932932Don't thank Fauxblob. He's not being helpful.
Your spelling and structure will get better as you get older. Overall, this shows a lot of creativity & imagination and that's more important.
I think this story would be a great Flash movie actually. It's like a big acid trip. People turning into cookies and clouds and shit. That's dope.
It ain't supposed to be a acid trip. You should try revenge of the sunfish though, that's one spooky acid trip game.