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Any comments or criticism to improve this would be gladly appreciated.
Cheers.
EDIT: Right Click > Zoom to see the "detail".
His suit is a bit high. You could lower how high up his suit reaches (halfway might be good). Then you could try moving the clock down a couple inches. Also, you could try making Golden a bit wider.
Golden doesn't smoke. The bar needs more shading. It needs a lower suit, and a more solid lighting. (most folks start from the upper left as the lightest part for some reason)
I dont like the color of Golden himself. Maybe make it darker and as Absinthe suggested add some shading
i like the high suit/smoking
looks ready for some serious business
give him some real nice shoes because I know golden has nice shoes