Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 29, 2009, 11:31:27 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 29, 2009, 11:31:27 PM
Art thread. Things stuff drawings.
old ones:
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FWell-dressed%2520Malignancy.PNG&hash=b081ecc35dac5009a8b2205418eef33ae1b72b85)
I don't like what happened to the bottom-right corner of this picture :\
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FThe%2520Pinky%2520is%2520a%2520Strange%2520Digit1.PNG&hash=3b5e10384a7dc6951359a7100afdf91dc2836e3e)
inspired by Ruger Clock's work: http://www.clockcrew.cc/talk/showthread.php?t=88091(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FISAWTHETRUTH.PNG%255B%2FIMGThis%2520reminds%2520me%2520of%2520that%2520one%2520guy%2520from%2520Death%2520Note.%2520you%2520know%2C%2520%255BI%255Dthat%2520guy%21%255B%2FI%255D%2520%2520%255BIMG%255Dhttp%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FShinigami.PNG&hash=4f9f1bc0f560005f1ebacfb8e54c9d87cacd8f59)
old ones:
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FWell-dressed%2520Malignancy.PNG&hash=b081ecc35dac5009a8b2205418eef33ae1b72b85)
I don't like what happened to the bottom-right corner of this picture :\
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FThe%2520Pinky%2520is%2520a%2520Strange%2520Digit1.PNG&hash=3b5e10384a7dc6951359a7100afdf91dc2836e3e)
inspired by Ruger Clock's work: http://www.clockcrew.cc/talk/showthread.php?t=88091(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FISAWTHETRUTH.PNG%255B%2FIMGThis%2520reminds%2520me%2520of%2520that%2520one%2520guy%2520from%2520Death%2520Note.%2520you%2520know%2C%2520%255BI%255Dthat%2520guy%21%255B%2FI%255D%2520%2520%255BIMG%255Dhttp%3A%2F%2Ffiles.myfrogbag.com%2Fby6oea%2FShinigami.PNG&hash=4f9f1bc0f560005f1ebacfb8e54c9d87cacd8f59)
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: Lump Clock on December 30, 2009, 03:05:28 AM
Post by: Lump Clock on December 30, 2009, 03:05:28 AM
Your second drawing almost blew my mind till I got to the bottom, like you said it's that bottom right portion that throws it off. Still epic though. As for the shading on the last one, you have good understanding of value, but your technique causes the shape in question to appear flat.
i.e. the shading on the head an cloak only semi follow the contour. Their going in the right direction based on the light source, but they don't follow the shape or outstanding details of the objects. A better example might be the scarf/wings. You want the shading to be the darkest in the corners or around the edges to give it depth, and you will want to have your pencil strokes follow the flow of the object instead of just straight lines that you *blended by smearing*. Use technique and pressure for a better shade, and make sure your strokes follow the contour of the shape or object.
i.e. the shading on the head an cloak only semi follow the contour. Their going in the right direction based on the light source, but they don't follow the shape or outstanding details of the objects. A better example might be the scarf/wings. You want the shading to be the darkest in the corners or around the edges to give it depth, and you will want to have your pencil strokes follow the flow of the object instead of just straight lines that you *blended by smearing*. Use technique and pressure for a better shade, and make sure your strokes follow the contour of the shape or object.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 30, 2009, 03:39:31 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 30, 2009, 03:39:31 PM
Ah, I see what you mean about the head! Like how instead of following around it and curving like a sphere, it's just kind of a straight line. I'll definitely have to study real-life examples more, as this is my first time being serious about shading (although that's not really a good excuse, now is it?). I didn't really want to have to smear the cape, but I couldn't find a way I liked the shading to go on that. It might help if I draw with some darker pencils, but I'll definitely take your advice! Thank you! :D
Also, glad you liked that second one there! I regret the fact that I was tired at the time and just wanted to fill in that spot quickly before I fell asleep. Maybe I can think of something better to put there later...
Also, glad you liked that second one there! I regret the fact that I was tired at the time and just wanted to fill in that spot quickly before I fell asleep. Maybe I can think of something better to put there later...
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: Munglai on December 30, 2009, 05:35:05 PM
Post by: Munglai on December 30, 2009, 05:35:05 PM
All I would say is don't use your psychedelic style to get around bits of anatomy and stuff that you don't understand. If you're planning to study anatomy then you're probably already aware of that but just be careful it doesn't become a crutch. Good luck with your studying.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: Converse on December 30, 2009, 05:53:21 PM
Post by: Converse on December 30, 2009, 05:53:21 PM
The snake worm thing in the second drawing has the greatest mouth I've ever seen. I love it
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 30, 2009, 06:14:23 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 30, 2009, 06:14:23 PM
Quote from: Munglai;1710806All I would say is don't use your psychedelic style to get around bits of anatomy and stuff that you don't understand. If you're planning to study anatomy then you're probably already aware of that but just be careful it doesn't become a crutch. Good luck with your studying.Hmm, good point. I see how that could happen, and I'll be sure to keep that in mind. Thanks!
@Converse: Thank you :) It's amazing what you can think up with a simple squiggly line!
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: PoisonshroomClock on December 30, 2009, 08:29:28 PM
Post by: PoisonshroomClock on December 30, 2009, 08:29:28 PM
Not so much a critique but something that will make your scanned work look a lot better: open up the images in photoshop and raise the contrast level. I find myself doing this all the time and it really does make the pencil/paper-type work look better.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: PowerGloveClock on December 30, 2009, 08:43:37 PM
Post by: PowerGloveClock on December 30, 2009, 08:43:37 PM
Quote from: PoisonShroom;1710851Not so much a critique but something that will make your scanned work look a lot better: open up the images in photoshop and raise the contrast level. I find myself doing this all the time and it really does make the pencil/paper-type work look better.:this: the second one seems somewhat faint, i wasn't able to enjoy it to the extent intended
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 30, 2009, 08:44:15 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 30, 2009, 08:44:15 PM
I messed around with the contrast for that picture, i'm gonna start drawing with darker pencils okay okay good.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: PoisonshroomClock on December 30, 2009, 09:35:41 PM
Post by: PoisonshroomClock on December 30, 2009, 09:35:41 PM
Quote from: TelePhone;1710859I messed around with the contrast for that picture, i'm gonna start drawing with darker pencils okay okay good.
It looks a lot better. Also I wouldn't stress too much about using darker pencils, if they look fine to you in person then I wouldn't worry about it.
I just think scanned illustrations always usually turn our a lot lighter then then they're meant to be.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 31, 2009, 12:01:43 AM
Post by: TelephoneClock on December 31, 2009, 12:01:43 AM
Truthfully I need some lighter pencils so I can focus on what I'm drawing as opposed to the eraser marks. But I digress :p
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: PankoClock on December 31, 2009, 01:44:57 AM
Post by: PankoClock on December 31, 2009, 01:44:57 AM
Everything looks beautifully macabre,I love it.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK on December 31, 2009, 03:34:45 AM
Post by: FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK on December 31, 2009, 03:34:45 AM
I'm having a fun time imagining that mohawk thing scuttling around a Bestbuy reorganizing all of the dvds and things with it's giant hand.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: Munglai on December 31, 2009, 10:58:44 AM
Post by: Munglai on December 31, 2009, 10:58:44 AM
Quote from: Converse;1710809The snake worm thing in the second drawing has the greatest mouth I've ever seen. I love it
Oh yeah I forgot to mention how awesome that snake thing is.
Quote from: Brak's Dad;1710934I'm having a fun time imagining that mohawk thing scuttling around a Bestbuy reorganizing all of the dvds and things with it's giant hand.
I keep reading all your posts in Brak's Dad's voice.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: CeleriacClock on January 01, 2010, 10:19:11 AM
Post by: CeleriacClock on January 01, 2010, 10:19:11 AM
The second and the last ones look wicked, have you tried coloring them in on photoshop or anything yet?
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: ChocolateCoffin on January 01, 2010, 11:31:09 AM
Post by: ChocolateCoffin on January 01, 2010, 11:31:09 AM
You have a very nice linear style. I'm not sure how I dig the final picture, but the others are quite nice. I'd be interested to see some drawing from life rather than your head.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on January 04, 2010, 11:13:50 AM
Post by: TelephoneClock on January 04, 2010, 11:13:50 AM
Quote from: CeleriacClock;1711323The second and the last ones look wicked, have you tried coloring them in on photoshop or anything yet?If I were to attempt that they would look too cartoony and lose their charm :\ I need to improve my photoshop skills as well.
Okay guys, here's some concept art for a future movie project:
It's a demon, in case you couldn't tell. Not sure what kind of head to use, though I'm kinda diggin' the skull shape. You're thoughts? Suggestions? Also, let it be known that the demon is portrayed as a Lock only so that it may be killed in a HORRIBLY PAINFUL DEATH OF BLOOD AND ROCK!
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 20, 2010, 02:05:59 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 20, 2010, 02:05:59 PM
Back from the brink!
DRAWINGS! YEAH! ABOUT THAT!
here are all the doodles from my school notes. ALL OF THEM!
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth06.deviantart.net%2Ffs70%2FPRE%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2F8%2F8%2FSchool_notes_doodles_1_by_Corpse_Pirate.png&hash=6984e2527c45a423f614577bd5554b49ec07fddf)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc06.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2Fc%2F1%2FSchool_notes_doodles_2_by_Corpse_Pirate.png&hash=0c039a6435c93ae8ed8eae1b3e2d3476000d6d3a)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth08.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2FPRE%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2Fa%2F9%2FSchool_notes_doodles_3_by_Corpse_Pirate.jpg&hash=57bbc7e1d227ef8201f48bb2ffa2a6336c74738c)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth08.deviantart.net%2Ffs70%2FPRE%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2F4%2Fe%2FSchool_notes_doodles_4_by_Corpse_Pirate.jpg&hash=fddde08522db2f6d2beb735a0dde56782126073c)
Well golly that sure was fun!
DRAWINGS! YEAH! ABOUT THAT!
here are all the doodles from my school notes. ALL OF THEM!
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth06.deviantart.net%2Ffs70%2FPRE%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2F8%2F8%2FSchool_notes_doodles_1_by_Corpse_Pirate.png&hash=6984e2527c45a423f614577bd5554b49ec07fddf)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc06.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2Fc%2F1%2FSchool_notes_doodles_2_by_Corpse_Pirate.png&hash=0c039a6435c93ae8ed8eae1b3e2d3476000d6d3a)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth08.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2FPRE%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2Fa%2F9%2FSchool_notes_doodles_3_by_Corpse_Pirate.jpg&hash=57bbc7e1d227ef8201f48bb2ffa2a6336c74738c)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth08.deviantart.net%2Ffs70%2FPRE%2Ff%2F2010%2F190%2F4%2Fe%2FSchool_notes_doodles_4_by_Corpse_Pirate.jpg&hash=fddde08522db2f6d2beb735a0dde56782126073c)
Well golly that sure was fun!
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: VuBawlsClock on July 20, 2010, 02:15:29 PM
Post by: VuBawlsClock on July 20, 2010, 02:15:29 PM
NEXT TO THE GUY POINTING, KINDA LOOKS LIKE MOTHER BRAIN
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 20, 2010, 02:54:13 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 20, 2010, 02:54:13 PM
MAYBE THEY ARE?
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: AbsintheClock on July 20, 2010, 04:20:02 PM
Post by: AbsintheClock on July 20, 2010, 04:20:02 PM
STOP DRAWING FANTASY. GO DRAW YOUR BACK YARD.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 22, 2010, 12:01:12 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 22, 2010, 12:01:12 PM
I have begun drawing from real life. Sort of because Absinthe suggested it, but mainly because I've been feeling stagnant with the way I have been drawing as of late. So I gave it a shot. Here is the speaker from my desk:
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc08.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2Ff%2F2010%2F203%2F6%2F8%2FSpeaker_by_Corpse_Pirate.png&hash=ce99b869abedc5ba73bfacfef0155c52b9a3c829)
(https://clockcrew.net/talk/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc08.deviantart.net%2Ffs71%2Ff%2F2010%2F203%2F6%2F8%2FSpeaker_by_Corpse_Pirate.png&hash=ce99b869abedc5ba73bfacfef0155c52b9a3c829)
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: I1I1I1I1I1I1I11111I1I1I1IIIIIII1I1I1I1I11I on July 22, 2010, 12:05:57 PM
Post by: I1I1I1I1I1I1I11111I1I1I1IIIIIII1I1I1I1I11I on July 22, 2010, 12:05:57 PM
GO BACK TO FANTASY, THEY'RE COOLER
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: Thunderbolt on July 22, 2010, 05:17:46 PM
Post by: Thunderbolt on July 22, 2010, 05:17:46 PM
Quote from: TelephoneClock;1770745I have begun drawing from real life. Sort of because Absinthe suggested it, but mainly because I've been feeling stagnant with the way I have been drawing as of late. So I gave it a shot. Here is the speaker from my desk:If I compare this with your other work it looks like you made this in 5 minutes
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: AbsintheClock on July 22, 2010, 09:03:51 PM
Post by: AbsintheClock on July 22, 2010, 09:03:51 PM
If you think he did this in 5 minutes you're dumb. The proportions are wrong, but keep practicing.
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 22, 2010, 10:26:27 PM
Post by: TelephoneClock on July 22, 2010, 10:26:27 PM
Quote from: Psykosonik;1770791If I compare this with your other work it looks like you made this in 5 minutes
It definitely took longer than 5 minutes, and it is certainly not as polished as my other stuff, but it was more or less an experiment. I'll still be drawing fantasy stuff (sorry Absinthe), but I'm going to continue to draw new things like this because it's fun to draw things I wouldn't normally draw. draw draw drawdrawdrawdraw
Title: Feedback on/critique my art
Post by: Thunderbolt on July 23, 2010, 02:19:21 PM
Post by: Thunderbolt on July 23, 2010, 02:19:21 PM
I didn't realy mean 5 minutes as in 300 seconds, but you know what I wanted to say, right? (less effort than the other drawings)