I LIK SCREUING AROND IN ABLETON LIVE
http://soundcloud.com/topcatyo/catacombs-and-reptiles
Not a big fan of the one instrument in the song, it doesn't mesh with everything.
You're showing more control over the sound and how the instruments work together. The melodies do a good job of keeping it moving, but it needs to go somewhere. I don't really like the thing at 4:17 with the drums. It's annoying, because it's a stock way to work that moment. Think of something else, either a rhythm not starting with tshh-ti tshh-ti, or not using a rhythm change to do what you want. At least 2 minutes too long for the content, but again, if you could make it go somewhere it might be worth it. Vocals?
cool, I liked it a lot, but I agree, it doesn't really go anywhere. The sound was nice, I liked the chord progression, but it could sound stronger and have more to do. I liked all the weird little background sounds a lot, things mixed together well.
I definitely agree, I had no idea where to go with the song. I plan on do a lot more work so I'm sure I'll figure out what to do eventually.
Thanks for the feedback, guys!