Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 03:31:49 PM
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 03:31:49 PM
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/psileo/fall-winds
Tell me what you guys think? :D
Tell me what you guys think? :D
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: Kodiakclock on September 24, 2011, 03:46:47 PM
Post by: Kodiakclock on September 24, 2011, 03:46:47 PM
sucks
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: AnkhClock on September 24, 2011, 03:50:43 PM
Post by: AnkhClock on September 24, 2011, 03:50:43 PM
It's not good. There's no sense of anatomy, it's in some poorly done anime knock-off style, the lines are uniformly thick and crooked, and it's a video game character. On the other hand if Grey makes another video game art collab, yours should be a shoe-in.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 03:53:43 PM
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 03:53:43 PM
Quote from: AnkhClock;1858610It's not good. There's no sense of anatomy, it's in some poorly done anime knock-off style, the lines are uniformly thick and crooked, and it's a video game character. On the other hand if Grey makes another video game art collab, yours should be a shoe-in.
I'm aware of it, this was my first. You don't have to be a total jerk about it. I'm a PS n00b. :/
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: BluezombieClock on September 24, 2011, 03:57:24 PM
Post by: BluezombieClock on September 24, 2011, 03:57:24 PM
Anime why
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 04:02:50 PM
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 04:02:50 PM
:grumpy:
Are you guys are going to tell me how bad it is or are you going to give me some advice?
Which is it?
Are you guys are going to tell me how bad it is or are you going to give me some advice?
Which is it?
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 04:04:25 PM
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 04:04:25 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858627:grumpy:
Are you guys are going to tell me how bad it is or are you going to give me some advice?
Which is it?
it's shit
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 04:07:15 PM
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 04:07:15 PM
Quote from: Buttplug;1858629it's shit
Okay then. Anything else you think is sh*t?
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: SockpuppetClock on September 24, 2011, 04:07:21 PM
Post by: SockpuppetClock on September 24, 2011, 04:07:21 PM
I'm going to actually give advice instead of ridiculing you for the rest of your life (wait while I write it)
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: VuBawlsClock on September 24, 2011, 04:10:50 PM
Post by: VuBawlsClock on September 24, 2011, 04:10:50 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858632Okay then. Anything else you think is sh*t?
Sprite movies
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: VuBawlsClock on September 24, 2011, 04:11:53 PM
Post by: VuBawlsClock on September 24, 2011, 04:11:53 PM
Open up Flash
Draw dammit
ANIMATE DAMMIT
UPLOAD DAMMIT
perfect advice, USE IT
Draw dammit
ANIMATE DAMMIT
UPLOAD DAMMIT
perfect advice, USE IT
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 04:12:34 PM
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 04:12:34 PM
Quote from: VuBawlsClock;1858636Sprite movies
pokemon fanart
video game movies
hentai movies
rupeeclock movies
If you want advice go and watch clock flash. like a lot form a lot of different people
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: BluezombieClock on September 24, 2011, 04:13:59 PM
Post by: BluezombieClock on September 24, 2011, 04:13:59 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858632Okay then. Anything else you think is sh*t?
Well, this is shit too:
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: Kombucha on September 24, 2011, 04:15:54 PM
Post by: Kombucha on September 24, 2011, 04:15:54 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858627:grumpy:Ankh and Ribs at least told you some of the things that were wrong with it. Snide or rude as they may seem it's helpful criticism, they're telling you not to make those same mistakes in the future.
Are you guys are going to tell me how bad it is or are you going to give me some advice?
Which is it?
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: VuBawlsClock on September 24, 2011, 04:24:51 PM
Post by: VuBawlsClock on September 24, 2011, 04:24:51 PM
What can brown do for you
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: AnkhClock on September 24, 2011, 04:25:49 PM
Post by: AnkhClock on September 24, 2011, 04:25:49 PM
I just did some brown.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: SockpuppetClock on September 24, 2011, 04:30:48 PM
Post by: SockpuppetClock on September 24, 2011, 04:30:48 PM
things I notice immediately:
HOW TO FIX THIS PART NEGATIVE ONE OF INFINITY:
DO NOT START OFF DRAWING FROM YOUR "IMAGINATION," DRAW THINGS YOU ACTUALLY SEE FIRST. LEARN FROM OBSERVATION OF ACTUAL THINGS AND NOT FROM WATCHING CARTOONS OR ANIME OR WHATEVER THE HELL. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE.
HOW TO FIX THIS PART ONE OF INFINITY:
The first step to any good human piece is an understanding of anatomy, and while I don't care if you adopt an anime style or whatever the hell, all talented artists (yes even talented anime artists) know anatomy enough to morph it into whatever style (cartoony or not) while retaining the perception of being proportioned correctly.
Here's a guideline that you should keep around but feel free to take subtle liberties if you're not completely I'm a edgy teen: a head should be proportioned around 2x3x3 (width,height,depth) and an adult body around 5-7 heads tall and (mostly if male) being around 2.5 heads wide (shoulder to shoulder)
A face (if looked at from the front) consists of three almost equally divided regions: the chin-to-mouth, the nose-to-eyebrows, and then the forehead, not just the facial features covering the entire front
Also, no one uses condescendingly large and misproportioned eye balls because everyone realized how stupid it looked
blah blah blah something LEARN TO DRAW REAL PEOPLE AND PROPORTIONS FIRST
***READ THIS FOR STUFF ON ANATOMY (READ THE THREADS PLEASE ANYTHING WILL HELP YOU)***
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=174730
STEP TWO OF INFINITY:
Get the lighting right. Apparently the light in your pic is coming from the top left it can't seem to decide when it comes down to it. Also, the way you've put the shadows implies a certain form to this person that scares me deeply. Imagine the objects in a 3d landscape (I hope to god you can imagine) and where the light source is coming from and what that light would hit and what it wouldn't. I'm getting lazy and I can't find the lighting tutorial I liked before so you just gotta figure out working out your drawings in a 3D plane in your mind and you should be better than right now
related:
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=51913 (shading on skin)
MORE READING:
PERSPECTIVE - http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=185515
OTHER STUFF (colors and other advice) - http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=174787
DIGITAL PAINTING (since you use photoshop but whatever) - http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=174732
This isn't a very good post but hopefully you'll end up better off than before (even if very little)
- horrible sense of lighting
- bad choice of photoshop brush
- anime eyes and a chin that could poke an eye out (more likely considering the god forsaken size of those eyes)
- lack of depth in any sense of the word
- wow that's a tiny scarf
- wow that everything is just :waitwhat:
HOW TO FIX THIS PART NEGATIVE ONE OF INFINITY:
DO NOT START OFF DRAWING FROM YOUR "IMAGINATION," DRAW THINGS YOU ACTUALLY SEE FIRST. LEARN FROM OBSERVATION OF ACTUAL THINGS AND NOT FROM WATCHING CARTOONS OR ANIME OR WHATEVER THE HELL. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE.
HOW TO FIX THIS PART ONE OF INFINITY:
The first step to any good human piece is an understanding of anatomy, and while I don't care if you adopt an anime style or whatever the hell, all talented artists (yes even talented anime artists) know anatomy enough to morph it into whatever style (cartoony or not) while retaining the perception of being proportioned correctly.
Here's a guideline that you should keep around but feel free to take subtle liberties if you're not completely I'm a edgy teen: a head should be proportioned around 2x3x3 (width,height,depth) and an adult body around 5-7 heads tall and (mostly if male) being around 2.5 heads wide (shoulder to shoulder)
A face (if looked at from the front) consists of three almost equally divided regions: the chin-to-mouth, the nose-to-eyebrows, and then the forehead, not just the facial features covering the entire front
Also, no one uses condescendingly large and misproportioned eye balls because everyone realized how stupid it looked
blah blah blah something LEARN TO DRAW REAL PEOPLE AND PROPORTIONS FIRST
***READ THIS FOR STUFF ON ANATOMY (READ THE THREADS PLEASE ANYTHING WILL HELP YOU)***
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=174730
STEP TWO OF INFINITY:
Get the lighting right. Apparently the light in your pic is coming from the top left it can't seem to decide when it comes down to it. Also, the way you've put the shadows implies a certain form to this person that scares me deeply. Imagine the objects in a 3d landscape (I hope to god you can imagine) and where the light source is coming from and what that light would hit and what it wouldn't. I'm getting lazy and I can't find the lighting tutorial I liked before so you just gotta figure out working out your drawings in a 3D plane in your mind and you should be better than right now
related:
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=51913 (shading on skin)
MORE READING:
PERSPECTIVE - http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=185515
OTHER STUFF (colors and other advice) - http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=174787
DIGITAL PAINTING (since you use photoshop but whatever) - http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=174732
This isn't a very good post but hopefully you'll end up better off than before (even if very little)
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 04:32:31 PM
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 04:32:31 PM
the problem is that most people who draw anime only want to draw anime and nothing else
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: DWARFINATORclock on September 24, 2011, 05:18:34 PM
Post by: DWARFINATORclock on September 24, 2011, 05:18:34 PM
kill me now
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: RenegadeClock on September 24, 2011, 07:09:15 PM
Post by: RenegadeClock on September 24, 2011, 07:09:15 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858627are you going to give me some advice?It needs more bukkake and tentacle rape.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 07:10:42 PM
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 07:10:42 PM
Quote from: RenegadeClock;1858740It needs more bukkake and tentacle rape.
I can't draw porn... yet...
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: BluezombieClock on September 24, 2011, 07:20:33 PM
Post by: BluezombieClock on September 24, 2011, 07:20:33 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858741yet...
:eek: also :suicide:
Hey shouldn't we change the suicide emoticon to bluegaskmask hanging himself or something?
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: AnkhClock on September 24, 2011, 07:20:58 PM
Post by: AnkhClock on September 24, 2011, 07:20:58 PM
Quote from: Takeshi;1858741I can't draw porn... yet...
Keep practicing, you'll get there! Then when you're done show it to Miraclefruit he loves that stuff.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: Kombucha on September 24, 2011, 07:37:40 PM
Post by: Kombucha on September 24, 2011, 07:37:40 PM
Quote from: BluezombieClock;1858748:eek: also :suicide:No because Elements told the CC he was going to commit suicide but didn't do it way before Blue Gas Mask.
Hey shouldn't we change the suicide emoticon to bluegaskmask hanging himself or something?
He's an OG (original gaybo).
Quote from: AnkhClock;1858749Keep practicing, you'll get there! Then when you're done show it to Miraclefruit he loves that stuff.Hahaha
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 09:40:46 PM
Post by: solitonmedic on September 24, 2011, 09:40:46 PM
Quote from: AnkhClock;1858749Keep practicing, you'll get there! Then when you're done show it to Miraclefruit he loves that stuff.
Will do! :D
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: BilliardBall10 on September 24, 2011, 11:25:54 PM
Post by: BilliardBall10 on September 24, 2011, 11:25:54 PM
good. ye like manga'z?!
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 11:40:11 PM
Post by: buttplug on September 24, 2011, 11:40:11 PM
Quote from: BilliardBall10;1858827good. ye like manga'z?!
bb10 contractions are the best contractions.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: AlbinoClock on September 24, 2011, 11:56:37 PM
Post by: AlbinoClock on September 24, 2011, 11:56:37 PM
Jump off a bridge it will break some bones and you'll be able to draw better.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: buttplug on September 25, 2011, 12:10:38 AM
Post by: buttplug on September 25, 2011, 12:10:38 AM
Quote from: RibsClock;1858845See that apostrophe? That means it's pozzezzive.
sry bro im drunk post'n
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: SnakeClock on October 02, 2011, 09:53:55 PM
Post by: SnakeClock on October 02, 2011, 09:53:55 PM
The left side of his face is longer than the right side. He doesn't have shoulders, he just seems to have a really long neck that plunges down into his chest, while his arms just sort of float there. This looks like it was drawn with one of those old-timey ball mice. The background is that really obnoxious "Leaves" brush, with a cheap "aura" effect around the character. There is, for some reason, shading between the stripes on his shirt. It has contradicting light sources. Why does he have eye shadow? Have you ever seen someone wearing a hoodie before? If he had to raise one of his arms up a bit, would it fill you with a sense of panic?
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: buttplug on October 02, 2011, 09:56:09 PM
Post by: buttplug on October 02, 2011, 09:56:09 PM
also don't draw shitty pokemon characters
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: SnakeClock on October 02, 2011, 09:58:10 PM
Post by: SnakeClock on October 02, 2011, 09:58:10 PM
Quote from: Buttplug;1862329also don't draw shitty pokemon characters
Oh yeah, I thought he looked familiar, and filled me with a vague sense of disgust.
Which one is it, by the way? I stopped learning their names after about 2002.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK on October 02, 2011, 10:48:17 PM
Post by: FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK on October 02, 2011, 10:48:17 PM
No no no you dont start your drawing career with anime that'll ruin you. Buy a book on figure drawing and just keep drawing people.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: VuBawlsClock on October 02, 2011, 10:49:22 PM
Post by: VuBawlsClock on October 02, 2011, 10:49:22 PM
nono nononono, draw inanimate objects with clocks on them. Its how you $uceed!
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK on October 02, 2011, 10:50:14 PM
Post by: FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK on October 02, 2011, 10:50:14 PM
http://www.amazon.com/Figure-Drawing-All-Its-Worth/dp/0857680986/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1317613682&sr=1-2
here get this
Actually fuck it just draw strawberryclock over and over again until you're better than zombie lincoln.
here get this
Quote from: VuBawlsClock;1862365nono nononono, draw inanimate objects with clocks on them. Its how you $uceed!
Actually fuck it just draw strawberryclock over and over again until you're better than zombie lincoln.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: SnakeClock on October 02, 2011, 10:53:48 PM
Post by: SnakeClock on October 02, 2011, 10:53:48 PM
Quote from: FloundermanClock;1862367http://www.amazon.com/Figure-Drawing-All-Its-Worth/dp/0857680986/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1317613682&sr=1-2
here get this
Hmm. I've seen that book, but never really picked it up. I should see if I can find a copy around here.
Title: My first PS drawing.
Post by: I1I1I1I1I1I1I11111I1I1I1IIIIIII1I1I1I1I11I on October 03, 2011, 05:31:33 AM
Post by: I1I1I1I1I1I1I11111I1I1I1IIIIIII1I1I1I1I11I on October 03, 2011, 05:31:33 AM
My advice is
you suck
you suck