Dark Discovery

MasterClock · September 12, 2008, 05:43:04 PM

VERSION 1
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1887079/

http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1888099/

Version 1: So I was bored and decided to make a wallpaper. It was originally going to be only black and white, but I decided to make the robot have a red aura for whatever reason. Pencil tool only used for the spikes on the vines, everything else is 110% brushed. It's not really finished but nobody's giving me any decent critique so I'm submitting it.

Version 2: I decided the robot sucks ass so I made a contrastingly bright white tree to suit the theme better.

GearBoxClock · September 12, 2008, 05:51:34 PM

Cool

BreadfruitClock · September 12, 2008, 06:08:03 PM

Robot looks very out of place. (not only the red but in general)
I like the lil' dark creatures though!

Loki Clock · September 12, 2008, 06:53:05 PM

Turn all that blurry shit into solid outlines.

TremcladClock · September 12, 2008, 07:12:03 PM

Agreeing with smelly breadfruit here. The robot - while being quite cool - obstructs the prospective icon area and doesn't mesh well with the general theme.

I like the little imps, they remind me of the little bloke I drew for my avatar.

HitchhikerClock · September 12, 2008, 08:10:46 PM

The background should be a lighter shade. Just a little bit, though.

MasterClock · September 12, 2008, 09:01:06 PM

Quote from: TremcladClock;1401629Agreeing with smelly breadfruit here. The robot - while being quite cool - obstructs the prospective icon area and doesn't mesh well with the general theme.

Yeah, I was torn between doing a robot or some kind of fancy looking tree of life or some shit like that. I'll probably do a tree when I have more time, see how that turns out.

Quote from: TremcladClock;1401629I like the little imps, they remind me of the little bloke I drew for my avatar.

That's what inspired me :L

Quote from: Doctor Barber;1401661The background should be a lighter shade. Just a little bit, though.

I was considering that, but I wanted to keep it strictly black, white, and red. I'll try it out sometime.

SpongeClock SquarePants · September 13, 2008, 10:33:29 AM

those creatures are funny

TruncheonClock · September 13, 2008, 06:43:55 PM

keep the imps, remove the robot and i'll use it.

MasterClock · September 13, 2008, 08:36:37 PM

Quote from: Flounderwife;1402588keep the imps, remove the robot and i'll use it.

done, updated

Wind-up Clock · September 13, 2008, 09:03:37 PM

Wow. The tree is really bright, and it fits somewhat better than the robot.

I like the contrast.

HitchhikerClock · September 13, 2008, 09:21:45 PM

25% more awesome

BreadfruitClock · September 13, 2008, 09:58:25 PM

Improved, but if you made the tree more realistic i'd like it more.

MasterClock · September 14, 2008, 03:08:51 AM

Quote from: Scout;1402727Improved, but if you made the tree more realistic i'd like it more.

I can't find a way of making it look more realistic without overdoing the branches. Any ideas?

DiscoBallClock · September 14, 2008, 04:43:04 AM

Quote from: MasterClock;1402903I can't find a way of making it look more realistic without overdoing the branches. Any ideas?

Try to make the trunk less linear. Make it more irregular.

TruncheonClock · September 14, 2008, 04:45:58 AM

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