5 this movie (no SBC)

[SouvlakiClock]

and list some ways to improve
 
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/463137

[CANNABISCLOCK]

5ed, I loved the quick little joke where he want "this will be a long journey, +1 second, here we are. I didn't like how it abruptly ended though. Maybe at least have a scene where iceblock explains why he did it then one of you suggests being friends instead of enemys

[Sombra]

"I" is capitalized and the music is a bit too loud, but yeah that was pretty decent for a short flash animation. I fived it.

[buttplug]

Your movies are improving.

[WildCherryPepsiClock]

Lower the volume on the music. Thats it.Yes I 5'd.

[frozennn]

The music was too sad but it was an improvement!

[Loki Clock]

Cut the music off at the same time the EDN starts, and there's one frame around the close-up of the NO INPUT where Souvlaki says something, and his speech arrow covers up the subtitle. Then in the next frame the arrow is in a different position than it was when he was talking.

[BilliardBall10]

very good. 5