'The Spark of Life', Oil on Canvas

[CrustClock]

An abstract piece - 30x30inches




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[SpinningCubeClock]

I don't like it tbh. I find the colours quite offputting and the brushtrokes around the triangle are too distracting. I'm not really a fan for this kind of abstract art. Tbh, I think people really need to be able to paint REALLY well before they can do abstract and make it look really good.

It's still nice though, keep going.

[CrustClock]

I think people really need to be able to paint REALLY well before they can do abstract and make it look really good.

Thanks for the emphasis, but still, ouch.

[FossilClock]

It's an interesting concept, but the flow is disorganized, kinda like it's flying off in all different directions. It just looks like a mashup of colors in a triangular area, really.
 
I can't even really glean an abstract concept from it if I'm not reading the title, and even then it's hard to see. Can't say that I'm a fan of it.

[SpinningCubeClock]

Thanks for the emphasis, but still, ouch.

ah, it probably sounded meaner than I meant. I didn't mean it in your case, just in general.

Also, what fossil said about the flowing of it. I think that's what I have a issue with. It just doesn't seem to flow nicely. Unless of course that's what you were trying to do