cc preloader. Any suggestions?

[AmberArachnidClock]

I'm making a CC preloader for the contest, but before I finish I was wondering if you guys had any suggestions.

Here it is:
http://media.putfile.com/Clock-Crew-Preloader

[zl]

The transition from the cartoon style to the OBEY is very cool.  The part after - where a white rectangle tweens about before the preloader ends - isn't as successful.  

I'm not quite sure how that effect is done well - you might want to study the Newgrounds preloader that has the same effect?

[patriotclock]

I like it I just don't like the style of the Clocks. The concept is cool though

[HitchhikerClock]

should blur out instead of that rectangle thing

[LeekClock]

The transition is very good indeed. Only the traced logo isn't entirely true to the original logo

[buttplug]

The only problem I can spot is that the lines on piney's leaves change thickness while they are "breathing".

The transition is very good indeed. Only the traced logo isn't entirely true to the original logo

Do you mean the colored clocks, or the black and white ones? I know the colored ones aren't exactly the same (Like SBC's leaves) but I don't think it really looks weird when it changes over to black and white. I think if he had SBC with just a round top instead if leaves popping off it would look kind of boring.

[LeekClock]

No I mean the black and white logo

[AmberArachnidClock]

The transition from the cartoon style to the OBEY is very cool.  The part after - where a white rectangle tweens about before the preloader ends - isn't as successful.  

I'm not quite sure how that effect is done well - you might want to study the Newgrounds preloader that has the same effect?

Yeah, I'll keep trying, that part of the preloader has been the hardest part to make look good.

should blur out instead of that rectangle thing

I'd love to but I want it to be compatible with previous versions of flash.

The transition is very good indeed. Only the traced logo isn't entirely true to the original logo

I'll try to adjust it to make it more accurate.

The only problem I can spot is that the lines on piney's leaves change thickness while they are "breathing".

Thanks for pointing that out! I'll go fix that.