I'm afraid of people (WIP)

[Silly Putty Clock]

People people people
Walking down the street
People people people
Watch them lift their feet
People people people
They don't even care
People people people
Living everywhere

People are a cancer
I wish they'd go away
If I were a person
I'd kill myself today
I'm afraid of people
But I'm not afraid to say
People people people
Fuck off!

[Silly Putty Clock]

Ok, so as a bit of background information, I've been trying my hand at writing punk rock lyrics lately. I think it comes naturally to me, but so far I haven't gotten anyone's opinion.

[buttplug]

Honestly when read it before your second post I assumed it was sung to the tune of this
[U2]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GOqKEVZmX_4[/U2]

[Silly Putty Clock]

Honestly when read it before your second post I assumed it was sung to the tune of this
[U2]GOqKEVZmX_4[/U2]

EDIT: Just to clarify, this isn't a serious songwriting effort by any means. I came up with it while I was in the shower.