A New Song (Listen to it)

[Kidney BeanClock]

This took me about a week to make, recording a lot of my own sounds.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/148256

Tell me whether this is going in the right direction or if the new techniques I used are shit.

[RomanClock]

[mp3]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/download/148256[/mp3]

[HachezClock]

don't listen to the review there, I dont understand how a 1 minute song with 8 bar (am I right?) patterns can be repetitive. its a good song, but I'm not a fan of the genre and can't go very in depth

[Loki Clock]

Metal-like.

[satan will destroy you]

don't listen to the review there, I dont understand how a 1 minute song with 8 bar (am I right?) patterns can be repetitive. its a good song, but I'm not a fan of the genre and can't go very in depth

by making it sounds reptitive? 8 bar patterns dont give a free pass to adventerious song writing

as for the song, it's not bad, but the structure is a bit hard to grip, that makes it seems reptitive, and the drums need some effect, be it high pass low bass bass boost reverb flanger whatever, it sounds super fruity loops this way

the ideas are not all that bad though