Kirby!

[FlashlightClock]

Im back for another artish thread.

I drew kirby at school, im not happy with the cheeks on the second one.

[PoisonshroomClock]

i don't like it, i want the arms to look like they're attached

[FlashlightClock]

im a bit rusty with flash :C

[PoisonshroomClock]

a lot better i think! now i think the foot facing the viewer needs to be a bit thicker, i don't know, it's just in contrast to the other foot it looks too small.

[FlashlightClock]

thank you for pointing out these things by the way.

[iced tea clock]

Change the gradient on the cheeks, so that it fades to a 0% alpha on the outside, this way it won't look so unnaturally sticked on to it.

[PsychonautClock]

Hmm, the first four images don't load.

Why is his back arm blue? And as suggested, make the highlights on his cheek fade to zero, so it blends. Also remove that stroke. I'd also make them a little more round. I'd also make his eyes a little rounder, too. The highlight on his eyes could blend in a bit more, instead of being a solid line like it is now. The gradient from his arm to his body looks a bit odd, maybe make it also fade to a 0 opacity to it blends with his body? Kinda cute, kinda scary ;P Also fixt your first postses.

[BilliardBall10]

i cant see the first pics.
 
good one tho

[TequilaClock]

make the face smaller, round the flaps, reduce the shoes

[patriotclock]

I dunno I just don't like how it looks. Maybe make the eyes bigger?