Beret's Clockday Movie Progress Thread

Beret · July 12, 2008, 06:23:52 PM

Okay guys, I saw that some other guy was also doing this, so I thought I might too.

So overall, the movie's name is BACK TO 2001. I was on a roll for a while, but then I got stuck. Here's what I have so far.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/107103.htm

Tell me what you think so far. I'll update as I progress.

Constructive comments and critisism please.

Beret · July 12, 2008, 09:00:37 PM

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Beret · July 12, 2008, 09:36:28 PM

C'mon guys, what do you think?

Beret · July 12, 2008, 09:56:27 PM

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Slurpee · July 12, 2008, 10:19:01 PM

it's only been a couple hours calm down beret

I'll watch it once this song is over

Il Duce · July 12, 2008, 10:24:00 PM

Quote from: SLURPEE;1361497it's only been a couple hours calm down beret

I'll watch it once his song is over

I didn't know he had a song.

Slurpee · July 12, 2008, 10:31:09 PM

It's ok, but there's really not much to work with as far as commenting. It's just an introduction, really, and there's not much indication where it's going.

The backgrounds could use some work though. It looks like you have some understanding of perspective, but it's not quite complete, based on the library background.
Have you checked out Zen's point-perspective tutorial?
It's still the best one that I know of.

Why'd you get stuck?

Quote from: Phantom Renegade;1361501I didn't know he had a song.

Pretend I posted a picture of slowpoke here.

DWARFINATORclock · July 12, 2008, 11:11:42 PM

Add subtitles.
Clean up the art, that is pick one style and stick to it.

Beret · July 13, 2008, 10:14:30 AM

Okay thanks

Bigglesnoots · July 13, 2008, 10:17:42 AM

the filter on the wheels when the car is in 1/4th perspective is horrible.

UnrealClock · July 13, 2008, 10:33:06 AM

The art is a bit inconsistent, some of it looks nice, some of it looks....not.

beebles · July 13, 2008, 10:34:30 AM

not the worst - could do with sticking to the one style as you go

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