Bug peoples

[catclock]

Man I was totally going to post a hating comment in here because of our little squabble but everyone is hating on you so I just want to say I LOVE YOU AND DON'T LET ANYONE TELL YOU DIFFERENT ALSO 陰茎　陰茎　陰茎　陰茎　陰茎

[GearBoxClock]

Man I was totally going to post a hating comment in here because of our little squabble but everyone is hating on you so I just want to say I LOVE YOU AND DON'T LET ANYONE TELL YOU DIFFERENT ALSO 陰茎　陰茎　陰茎　陰茎　陰茎

Thanks to Babel Fish, I speak Japanese. The above Japanese means "Penis penis penis penis penis".

[SoBe Clock]

I actually think they look fine, because anime does not instantly mean something is bad.

Just try to get a uniform style going between all 3 characters and I think it will work well.

Also, the Inkay's clothes are fine, it's just that in the first view they look painfully tight. loosen them up a bit and it should work.

[BreadfruitClock]

I actually think they look fine, because anime does not instantly mean something is bad.

Just try to get a uniform style going between all 3 characters and I think it will work well.

Also, the Inkay's clothes are fine, it's just that in the first view they look painfully tight. loosen them up a bit and it should work.

i'm sorry but this post is too positive please leave the premises as we do not do that here

But really i would like to part from anime, especially when animating. Unfortunately anything else i try looks really bad, having a style that can be recognized as individual is what i want.

[AirPumpClock]

i'm sorry but this post is too positive please leave the premises as we do not do that here

But really i would like to part from anime, especially when animating. Unfortunately anything else i try looks really bad, having a style that can be recognized as individual is what i want.

In that case, take reality and exaggerate it.

[catclock]

Thanks to Babel Fish, I speak Japanese. The above Japanese means "Penis penis penis penis penis".

お前はあたまに来るわ

[SpongeClock SquarePants]

gay jap shit

[Loki Clock]

An old poor attempt, i tried to get it in proper proportion but it still reaks of anime.

That's a lot cooler at least.

Well, that's certainly a fine way to eradicate any potential originality.

Forgetting how you've been taught to draw eradicates originality? What? I'm not telling him he has to be a realist, I'm just saying he has to look at an eye like he looks at an eye, and draw based on HIS interpretation of the forms instead of going by the way he's been taught to, which is necessarily based on someone else's interpretations.

[Solenoidclock]

Inkay just needs a minor rework is all. I really like the khaki engineer look on a girl, but putting her in mens full-length overalls might be better. Baggy in the legs, pulled in by the belt at the waist, and formed at the top of the breast with an airspace between the waist and about two inches below the tit. A better weapon might also be an improvement; Pay a tribute to Macintosh and give the semi-hot chick a sledge to throw around, or if try a cordless powertool, like a drill, circular saw, or automatic feed screwgun.

Oh, and Inquisitor draws really good bug girls. You should have him send you some.

[BreadfruitClock]

heres some more shit


tried to be alittle different with this one, but i hate the results

gay jap shit

[Loki Clock]

tried to be alittle different with this one, but i hate the results

You still have the exaggerated extremities and distance distortion from anime, but the face is a definite departure, and not for worse. The hair needs work, but hair is always hard. Right now it looks like SBC leaves.

You'll probably hate your art for a long time when you're first breaking away from the beaten path. For the next couple years, perhaps, it will probably look unformed and weak in comparison. Persist, though. If you never practice building your own style the style will never be built, and you'll remain limited to imitation.

Just look at some pictures of anime expressions next to pictures of the same expressions in a realist style. That should give you some perspective on the traits of your style that are inherited from anime. The things that make anime anime and not some other style.

[ArrowClock]

try copying photographs instead of looking up tutorials. on how to draw an anime face.
also watch this video it will help you start I promise
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Wogh holy shit this video helped me shitloads. I learned loads of stuff great find!



As for your bug people. I think you should add some more subtle bug characteristics. Or make them more bug like. Because to me they just

And feel like crazy people. Like the guy with the bumble bee coat. I don't know I may be rambling on now. regardless there very nice. Except for that tiki looking light bug girl. you should change her boots into girly shoes. Also, I don't like how she has that thing sticking out of there. You should have it aiming up instead of down. I don't see how it could fit in that tiny skirt.
 Here I drew something to help you understand what I mean.




EDIT: Holy fuck, that moth is fucking sexy!

[BreadfruitClock]

As for your bug people. I think you should add some more subtle bug characteristics. Or make them more bug like. Because to me they just

Just what?

Except for that tiki looking light bug girl. you should change her boots into girly shoes. Also, I don't like how she has that thing sticking out of there. You should have it aiming up instead of down. I don't see how it could fit in that tiny skirt.
 Here I drew something to help you understand what I mean.

I should have included a side view, its not in her skirt, its pretty large starting from her lower back. The part you see is the tip. As for the shoes, all designs are not final, so you're suggestion is appreciated! (extremly hot drawling btw)

EDIT: Holy fuck, that moth is fucking sexy!

Thanks!

[Sandiskman]

The grasshopper from James and the Giant Peach came to mind.

[buttplug]

The cricket guy looks pretty classy. I also like how you do outfits, they aren't all boring. I don't really have any criticism because frankly you are a mush better artist than me, haha.

Oh, and Inquisitor draws really good bug girls. You should have him send you some.

Haha I want to see these.

[BreadfruitClock]

I am trying to come up with something original as i type! Well, i was. Its fucking 3:30 im tired ok. I'll scan some shit later, and i want opinions!

The cricket guy looks pretty classy. I also like how you do outfits, they aren't all boring.

Thanks! You have an A+ sig!

[Kombucha]

I like Buttplug's signature too.

[Munglai]

I like the bee man and the cricket man, they're the most interesting in terms of how you applied the insect idea to human form.

I don't understand why people are suggesting you look at photos or american cartoons or specific artists without even mentioning drawing from life. Drawing from life is the way forwards bud.

Also on the subject of only being able to draw girls in anime fashion: the key to drawing the opposite gender is to stop caring whether they're attractive or not. It's the longing to draw what you're attracted to that gets in the way of clear thought. All you need to do is analyse the difference between men and women and it becomes simple. There's actually not much difference at all, it's almost entirely in the thickness of the neck and shoulders. Don't let what you think about girls get in the way of what girls actually look like.

[Munglai]

Oh also I don't like the way that portrait tutorial man draws. I don't think you should know what you're going to be doing next I'm more for constant spontaneity and invention.

[SpinningCubeClock]

Hey, looking good. I agree with everything said in here. I think the way you are making it look too anime is in the eyes. Try to make them smaller. Right now, they're pretty massive and make the whole head look anime. Check out Arrowclocks reference bug girl. See the eyes? Yup.