resisting death story

[BilliardBall10]

i was thinking of something related 2 this, for a writing contest, or small challg.
it could be some challenge, or maybe an idea for a nice story. what is the scariest time for a man? what could be the end? what could all this wrap up to? should people die? is war neccesarry?
 
i brainstorm, so yea, here is a part of the story i write
 
''and in the battlefield, he was falling... like there was a moment, that time has been slower, and since then, everything freezed. He was falling, falling, falling... he fell on ground. the only thing he was able to feel was the sound of leaves that stopped his fall, and made him understand the fearing, he had. He was dyin' on there.
his feelings, became numb.he was not able to feel pain.his fear was now reallity. he was slowly, feeling he was about to sleep. he was ready... to die... now...
But suddenly, a feeling of sadness, emerged, from his mind... like a man who is getting out from the sea.. Trying to grasp a breathing of air. his wife. then, one more thought. His two children. more, and always familly inspiring thoughts where coming. He was starting to be concetrated. His sight, started to change. He didnt felt as he saw blurry visions of his enviroment,anymore he now could see the sword that was stabbed at his soldier's back.Sadness became horror, what could he attempt so he could help the city?
he could see the whole battle scene, and watch a forest in some meters away... he could now remember... why he fought. His familly, woudl die, if the enemy would charge in Metonic city. They would kill his familly, and everyone's else. That was it. it was enough for his to strain himself to wake.
His sight started to look better, as he openedonce more his eyes, his strength, was NOT enough, as he fall back on the ground, and realised his leg couldnt support his weight. but he didnt stopped. the pain surrounding his mind, was now clear, as his leg was deeply hurt, and some blood was appearring as he was attemptin to get up... finally he reallised pain was his ally. with pain he felt aws was alive. still a hope for his familly. he would fight it back.he grabbed his sword, and he grabbed it as it was his hope to stand on life.he tried to balance, and then secrin.. he was standing. he seen the blood splatter from his leg, but he wasnt so much afraid. he felt taht he had to fight more. to keep on being alive, for his familly if for anyone else.
he just had to reach the city''
 
anyway, its not v. good, but yea. any ideas.. will help. would you like any contest/challenge?
 
err move it if not fits

[TruncheonClock]

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