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Farted by Scherzo, March 30, 2009, 05:18:35 PM

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Scherzo

March 30, 2009, 05:18:35 PM
In as much detail as possible. Drank too much, this happened, needs drums. More interested in improvement than nice reviews, as much as they're appreciated.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/225541

PS: Sup Clock Crew.
This Space Intentionally Left Wing.

Pin Clock

#1
March 30, 2009, 05:25:13 PM
Why, our user names are very similar! (Or at least the first part)

And it doesn't suck. The singing could be better but it isn't the worst in the world. It could probably be chilled down a bit though.
if there were two guys on the moon and one of them killed the other with a rock that'd be pretty fucked up wouldn't it?

Scherzo

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March 30, 2009, 05:46:57 PM
Mine's an Italian musical term meaning 'Joke', heh.


I'm specifically asking what parts about it are the worst parts because honestly... asskissing praise is not hard to come by and doesn't really help me make anything better. I think I need to work on editing/mastering for vocals, this entire thing was pretty much just one-take direct recorded, haha.
This Space Intentionally Left Wing.

Pin Clock

#3
March 30, 2009, 06:28:17 PM
Quote from: Scherzo;1553723Mine's an Italian musical term meaning 'Joke', heh.

Mine's a perverted swordsman from an obscure Japaneses puzzle series that got released in America only with Sonic and Kirby characters and themes.

QuoteI'm specifically asking what parts about it are the worst parts because honestly... asskissing praise is not hard to come by and doesn't really help me make anything better. I think I need to work on editing/mastering for vocals, this entire thing was pretty much just one-take direct recorded, haha.

Well, I don't like being harsh, but if you insist....

I still say the guitar isn't worse, but sometimes it goes too high. In the beginning, the singing sounds monotone, but eventually it gets beyond too loud at 1:08 till the end, and it just blares my speakers. the singing needs serious fixing quality wise. I think the main thing needing to be fixed is the backup singer. Seriously.

There, hope that's better criticism for you.
if there were two guys on the moon and one of them killed the other with a rock that'd be pretty fucked up wouldn't it?

K3LTR0N

#4
March 30, 2009, 06:43:42 PM
i liked it

Scherzo

#5
March 30, 2009, 06:57:57 PM
Quote from: Schezo Wegey;1553804I still say the guitar isn't worse, but sometimes it goes too high. In the beginning, the singing sounds monotone, but eventually it gets beyond too loud at 1:08 till the end, and it just blares my speakers. the singing needs serious fixing quality wise. I think the main thing needing to be fixed is the backup singer. Seriously.

There, hope that's better criticism for you.

Perfect. Thanks mate.
This Space Intentionally Left Wing.

Loki Clock

#6
March 31, 2009, 02:52:22 PM
You go off on a few notes, but all around it's good for a pop song. See if you can talk to Nose, he might have something interesting to say about it.

Kidney BeanClock

#7
March 31, 2009, 04:08:52 PM
Quote from: Scherzo;1553628In as much detail as possible. Drank too much, this happened, needs drums. More interested in improvement than nice reviews, as much as they're appreciated.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/225541

PS: Sup Clock Crew.

I could record drums, with less than perfect sound quality, if you wanted to collaborate. I just got a few mics set up.

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