Album coverrrrr

[Poltergeist]

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/040609/52199_zeppelin.php

I had a few hours to kill and was bored. This is for a band four of my friends are in - I didn't have a title for the actual album, so it's just the bands name right now. It's a swf so you can zoom in and all

[Poltergeist]

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[CrustClock]

I like the blue thing.

The font and it's nearness to the edge is unappealing, however.

I don't like the band name.

The tentacles are a bit silly.

[Poltergeist]

The blue thing is meant to be a blimp of sorts, dropping bombs on the octopus/squid, which is there due to the band name.

The name "Brides of the Atom" comes from the Ed Wood movie, one of the worst rated of all time. I didn't come up with the band name, but I brought up the movie and they liked the sound of it.

Where would you say I should put the band name?

[CrustClock]

Move the words right a bit, so they're not right on the edge. Also, try a different font and spacing - it's a bit MS Word.

The edge of the tentacles shouldn't be so dark because the blimp/ explosions don't have a similarly dark outline

[Poltergeist]

Okay, thanks. The font I actually did myself, but I see your point. I'll work on it tomorrow