horrible ambientish shit i made in 2 days

[splatter]

http://www.4shared.com/file/213262884/ae77111c/shit_warthog.html
http://www.4shared.com/file/213262872/c08ca8e6/felt.html

comments / criticism welcome

[TapedeckClock]

second one sounds cool like hard dnb.
the first one though i didnt really like as much.

[AmberArachnidClock]

The second one starts out really tight but I wish it builded into something tighter. Like if you added some vocals or another instrument or something. nice work.

[mauserclock]

i hate it because you made it

[splatter]

second one sounds cool like hard dnb.
the first one though i didnt really like as much.

i might extend it and throw some heavier bass/drums in there, thank you

The second one starts out really tight but I wish it builded into something tighter. Like if you added some vocals or another instrument or something. nice work.

its really rough, i havent really had the chance to extend it yet but im glad you like it. i was thinking of adding vocals in it later, there are some in there right now that are very subtle, mostly just me inaudibly whispering things

i hate it because you made it

me too

[miracle fruit]

listening to the first one now. sounds like some awesome music in the setting of a scary jungle

second ones pretty eery too. i like them both