Messed up Children's Stories part 2

[FrankClock]

Ok, so this story was made before the other one. So this should have been part 1 and the other one should have been part 2 but screw it. The final draft of this was penned on March 16, 1995. So this was probably the assignment prior to the other one. No one I went farther in that one as opposed to this one. I had to keep the audience interested. This also has a picture attached to it and I shall post this as well once I get it on the computer. The parts in red at the bottom are corrections from the teacher.

I now present:

The Crash

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One day Tom was walking home from school. Tom throught he was the smartest in his class, but he really wasn't. He did do good in school, however he always just barely made the honor roll.

Tom was only three weeks away from turning sixteen. He could drive better than anyone else in his class; he could even parellel park.

Tom had already picked his car out, but he still needed five hundred and fifty dollars left to get it. He had a job that paid one hundred and fifty dollars a week, and he got fifty dollars for his birthday. He still needed fifty dollars.

Tom was getting nervous, he was running around looking for his chance to get fifty bucks. None of his friends would give it to him. Then the day before his birthday when he saw Benny, his best friend, Benny offered, "I'll loan you the money if you let me drive the car."

Tom answered, "Alright."

The next day Tom and Benny went to get Tom's car. As they were getting close they saw the car Tom was going to get, a red 87' Chevy with a black top. When they got in, Tom told Benny to watch the car while he got the manager, Mr. Trent. When Tom and the manager got back, Benny was asleep on the car. Tom yelled at Benny and hit him on his head because been was asleep on his new car. Mr. Trent got the keys and gave them to Tom.

Before they left, Tom said, "To pay you back, like you said, I'll let you drive us home."

When the two boys got to Tom's house, Tom asked if Benny would like to come in.

Benny said, "Alright!" and ran in.

When Tom came in Benny was sitting next to Jimmy, Tom's little brother. Jimmy was playing sega. Tom wanted to play, so he told Jimmy to get out.

Jimmy wouldn't listen then Tom said, "If you get out I'll take you to the movies tomorrow."

Jimmy got up immediately and left. Benny took the game Jimmy was playing and put in a basketball game in the sega. Tom kept beating Benny so Benny also left.

The next day Tom and Jimmy went to pick Benny up. Benny said, "Let me drive one more time up to the movies."

Tom said, "Fine."

What Tom didn't know was that Benny had been drinking alcohol. They were going over a bridge and Benny went over the side with Tom and Jimmy.

The next day the papers said, "Two sixteen year olds and a ten year old killed in Car Accident due to alcohol."

[Marlin Clock]

You could say you wanted it to be like Quinton Tarantino, that guy always pulls the non-chronological crap.

Was your teacher distressed at all when reading that sudden end?

Also, did you have World Series Baseball? I loved that game.

[FrankClock]

was your teacher distressed at all when reading that sudden end?

Also, did you have World Series Baseball? I loved that game.

I never went to see the Guidence Counsler so I guess all was good. Also no. I mostly played NBA Live and Madden/Tecmo Bowl on the sega.

[Marlin Clock]

For us it was NBA Jam, World Series Baseball, or Sonic 2