Pico, Darnell, y Nene

[PEANUTBUTTERCLOCK]

tell me what improvements are needed so when I submit this it's beautiful please.

[Wind-up Clock]

tell me what improvements are needed so when I submit this it's mooi please.

If the left side of Picos' head is the side away from the light, why is there shinyfication on the top of his hairfluffs?

His pants seem to be missing a fly, unless they're short shorts.

Plus Darnell's tongue doesn't seem to come out of his mouth, more like stapled on to it.


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[PEANUTBUTTERCLOCK]

yeah.

they're short shorts.

[TremcladClock]

I'm not much a fan of your mucky, low-smoothing outlines or colouring technique, but I'm just a senseless nitpicker.

[Wind-up Clock]

Also, the shadows don;t make much sense either. EX: Pico's shadow goes behind him and to the left, but his body shading goes down and to the right, implying two different light sources. I wouldn't mind it so much if the shadows weren't so strong.

[/more nitpicking]

[PEANUTBUTTERCLOCK]

I'm not much a fan of your mucky, low-smoothing outlines or colouring technique, but I'm just a senseless nitpicker.

that hurts tremclad.  :'

[TequilaClock]

Change the lighter for a chicken leg.

[TremcladClock]

that hurts tremclad.  :'

You'll never improve your craft unless you get the straight, cold, heartbreaking truth!


By the way, I guess I'll offer a valuable tip on colouring, seeing as countless people don't know how to do it correctly. Bright colours (on the upper half of the colour mixer) reflect light. Refrain from apply shading to these colours by simply using a darker shade of the same colour. White surfaces should not have grey shadows, but rather a colour that's relative to the surrounding area (like pink shadows on a white ball in a red room or blue shadows on snow). Play around with your colours a bit to achieve maximum sexiness. Below is an example of how flesh tones should be shaded.

[SpinningCubeClock]

You'll never improve your craft unless you get the straight, cold, heartbreaking truth!


By the way, I guess I'll offer a valuable tip on colouring, seeing as countless people don't know how to do it correctly. Bright colours (on the upper half of the colour mixer) reflect light. Refrain from apply shading to these colours by simply using a darker shade of the same colour. White surfaces should not have grey shadows, but rather a colour that's relative to the surrounding area (like pink shadows on a white ball in a red room or blue shadows on snow). Play around with your colours a bit to achieve maximum sexiness. Below is an example of how flesh tones should be shaded.

This. Oh god this! Not so much for you, but nobody knows how to do this! It's common sense geez. Also, the flame on the lighter shouldn't have a shadow.

[TequilaClock]

Also, the flame on the lighter shouldn't have a shadow.

Haha didn't noticed until you mentioned.

[buttplug]

It's common sense geez.

Not really :/