Song Opinion

[Pissed-on Clock]

Hey pals, I just wanted a few opinions on a song I'm writing with my band. I know this should go the the music section but I just wanted some quick reviews, move it there if you like.


http://www.filefreak.com/pfiles/112/Alaska.mp3

[F U Clock]

I like the name Alaska. Put that opening part on a bass and you'll sound like Tool. Also I'd say try playing that heavy guitar at about half-tempo, see what it sounds like as a slow burner. When it goes thrashy then speed that shit up.

Just my two cents.

[Pissed-on Clock]

I like the name Alaska. Put that opening part on a bass and you'll sound like Tool. Also I'd say try playing that heavy guitar at about half-tempo, see what it sounds like as a slow burner. When it goes thrashy then speed that shit up.

Just my two cents.

Thank you, F U.

[F U Clock]

Eh, take it or leave it. It's your song, bebbe.

[K3LTR0N]

kewl

[DecepticonClock]

Sounds kinda like nirvana a little then old metallica. I like it.

[Silly Putty Clock]

gRuNGe

You'd better set this to some damn depressing/angry/ironic lyrics.

[GodClock]

i like the 'recorded-through-a-crappy-mic-through-a-telephone' sound, p tight.

also the end sounded just like metallica

[Thor]

I like it

[Pissed-on Clock]

Sounds kinda like nirvana a little then old metallica. I like it.

lol we're hoping to bring back 80's thrash

gRuNGe

You'd better set this to some damn depressing/angry/ironic lyrics.

Thrash, actually. So lyrics will involve some angry struggle (maybe alaska?).

i like the 'recorded-through-a-crappy-mic-through-a-telephone' sound, p tight.

also the end sounded just like metallica

No, just a crappy mic! and I'll take the metallica comments as compliments.

[AstronautClock]

pretty awesome!
and old metallica is a compliment but new metallica lollolol