Art stuff

[DominoClock]

general topic for my art
I'd appreciate constructive criticism



that's unlocked pumpkinlock btw
only a sketch at first but I decided to color it

[AbsintheClock]

I'm not feeling it. It looks sloppy.

[Asshatclock]

well if its a pumpkinlock youre drawing then my first critisism would be that you should make it look like a pumpkin.

[Wind-up Clock]

I see the pumpkin.

The hoses... the hoses... unless something inside is making the hoses super squishy, they shouldn't look like that. Yes, i know it's a colored sketch, but it does detract from the appearance.

[DominoClock]

I see the pumpkin.

The hoses... the hoses... unless something inside is making the hoses super squishy, they shouldn't look like that. Yes, i know it's a colored sketch, but it does detract from the appearance.

Thanks, yeah. They're supposed to be some sort of wires though. But what you said still stands either way.

Asshat, I don't know what you mean I'm pretty sure it looks somewhat like a pumpkin. Of course I said that it was pumpkin lock unlocked, so he has to look a little more hardcore and less like a pumpkin.

And Absinthe that wasn't really constructive criticism.
As I said though, I will be posting the cleaned up/redrawn version soon. One that will not be a colored sketch, maybe then it won't look as sloppy anymore.

[Munglai]

The drawing is nice. I'm not too into floaty monsters but the way you've drawn it feels pretty solid. I kind of dig the way you colour but it feels a bit like you're hiding behind the loose style and not really thinking as much as you should be. That might just be because it's a sketch but yeah when you clean it up or whatever, try not to lose that looseness completely, there's something nice about it.

[DominoClock]

The drawing is nice. I'm not too into floaty monsters but the way you've drawn it feels pretty solid. I kind of dig the way you colour but it feels a bit like you're hiding behind the loose style and not really thinking as much as you should be. That might just be because it's a sketch but yeah when you clean it up or whatever, try not to lose that looseness completely, there's something nice about it.

Thanks, means a lot coming from you. I love your use of colors.
The shading on my drawing looks pretty confusing and doesn't make a lot of sense. It's one of the things I want to fix with the clean version, for sure. Thanks for the input.