Fiven: Life in Clocktopia #1 Pt1

[Money]

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/506881
Vote Five!
I spent two weeks working on the first episode of my new series "Life in Clocktopia."
 
tHEREs no preloader, just a play button so wait a little while b4 u press play.

[AstronautClock]

why didnt you download a preloader lol.

anyway I fived it.

gonna watch it now

edit: pretty nice

[Thunderbolt]

[Silly Putty Clock]

I didn't like it. I know for a fact that the one joke in the entire flash was stolen from South Park, and the music was horrible. Also, you stole all those flas. So pretty much the only parts that you did yourself were the animation and the backgrounds, and neither of those were really that good.



EDIT: Ok there were two jokes. Meh, the one you wrote yourself was ok. I'm pretty sure you wrote the one about the video crowd. I can't remember the South Park episode that well.

[Thunderbolt]

EDIT: Ok there were two jokes. Meh, the one you wrote yourself was ok. I'm pretty sure you wrote the one about the video crowd. I can't remember the South Park episode that well.

that one was also in south park

[Silly Putty Clock]

that one was also in south park

Ok then. Yeah Money, you're a hack.

[camoclock is a great man]

that was painfully unfunny

[clockradioclock]

Fived for effort.

Unless you're aiming for humorously negative reviews from newgrounders, which doesn't seem to be the case, you should consider putting more effort into your flash.

If what they say is true, try coming up with your own material. You also need to spend more time animating. Draw your own flas, it'll certainly add originality to the flash.

From what I gather, judging by your previous submissions, you keep trying to create a series on Newgrounds. I don't recommend that. Instead, put more effort into a single flash with a solid story line. It'll be much more rewarding.

[patriotclock]

Fived

It wasn't very good though. Be funnier

[DillClock]

what a shit movie

get your own jokes/plots

[Money]

Fived
 
It wasn't very good though. Be funnier

Okay, I'll work on that.
 

what a shit movie
 
get your own jokes/plots

I know that's what I'm going to do for the part 2, I'm going to change the plot and make it my own.

[GamblerClock]

I know that's what I'm going to do for the part 2, I'm going to change the plot and make it my own.

It wont be a series then...

[Sheep]

If this wasn't a Clock Movie, I would've voted it a 0.

[DillClock]

don't make an episode two just yet

delete this and make a new episode one

[Thunderbolt]

part 1 isnt realy needed for the story

[Money]

don't make an episode two just yet
 
delete this and make a new episode one

I'm making a PART two not an EPISODE two, and I'm not gonna delete this because I spent two weeks on this and I actually put effort into this one.

[Money]

It wont be a series then...

Well I'm not really gonna change the PLOT...but I'm going to make it my own, and make it very different from the South Park episode.

[Heliopios]

this is the worst video thats suck so much i feel bad for you cause you aint ever gonna get a girlfriend
all your ganna do is sit around and watch porn on the internet of anime naruto and tell girls you got a big ding dong witch u most likely dont have

[Money]

this is the worst video thats suck so much i feel bad for you cause you aint ever gonna get a girlfriend
all your ganna do is sit around and watch porn on the internet of anime naruto and tell girls you got a big ding dong witch u most likely dont have

All you really needed to say was "I don't like it", jerk.

[FLOUNDERMAN_CLOCK]

I still don't know what a helioporpous is.