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Eh, First try?

Farted by John Deere Clock, April 24, 2008, 09:03:09 PM

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John Deere Clock

Eh, First Try at a new .fla?  Comments And Suggestions please.

Woah

TequilaClock

Well it is basically the logo which is a-ok as I can't fin extra details to add. I would suggest to try making a standard round clock, not sure of your style tho. Nice lookin'

FlossClock

I love RHCP please dont be shitty and sully their good name.

PecanClock

I don't like it. Jazz it up and make it less simple.

TremcladClock

It's clean and symmetrical, so kudos on that. I'm sure there's more you can do to bring it to life, though. Maybe add some gloss or detailing to it and try to inject more character into the clock face, if you please.


Ti-83Clock


John Deere Clock

Yes It is simple, But then again the RHCP logo is only a star shape thing.  Anyway thanks for the comments I'll get to updating it. Thanks :D
Woah

frozennn

It's nice and clean, and easy to build on.
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John Deere Clock

Well, I have a new copy :D.  I love how the body came out, The clock I don't know, Kinda experimental. Tell me what you think :)

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EnvelopeClock


TorchClock

Quote from: StagBeetle;1291976it needs some zazz

Pizzazz.

HeinekenClock

Quote from: RHCP Clock;1291959Well, I have a new copy :D.  I love how the body came out, The clock I don't know, Kinda experimental. Tell me what you think :)


Eh the clock is horrid in the new version, sorry :wiebel:

You could probably experiment with a little gloss and shade to give it a glasslike look, which would be cool on this I think. If you don't know what gloss is, I recommend looking it up.

Ti-83Clock

Quote from: amy_winehouse_clock;1292038Eh the clock is horrid in the new version, sorry :wiebel:

You could probably experiment with a little gloss and shade to give it a glasslike look, which would be cool on this I think. If you don't know what gloss is, I recommend looking it up.

i thought it looked kind of cool, but would be really tough to make expressions with that thing

LuxenbergClock

I like the asterisk-clock.
QuoteBob awesome

Loki Clock

Never use gloss ever. Try filling in the wedges on the new clock face with dark gray triangles, so that it looks like the clock it's self is hexadecagonal in shape with the logo shape embedded. Also try drawing the hands and numbers with a small brush instead of lines, and make the body more saturated. Screw the people who think it's too simple, simplicity in design is perfection, your character is a logo, and good logos have nothing to do with anything if not design. So, the rest of your avatar should follow suit.

LuigiClock

You outta pocket...

PecanClock

Getting better! I like the clock very much.

HeinekenClock

Quote from: ZeitmiserZeitmesser;1297217Never use gloss ever.

I hate it when people say things like this, as if a certain way of doing something is wrong in 100% of the time.

Loki Clock

Quote from: amy_winehouse_clock;1298543I hate it when people say things like this, as if a certain way of doing something is wrong in 100% of the time.

It's a matter of my opinion that gloss is ugly and gaudy. I would find it acceptable iff the material being drawn is a glossy thing, like pearls. But then I hate the look of pearls, too.

cokezeroglock

fuckkkkk yeah rhcp, best band ever