Clock Crew, give me some feedback. Make me feel alive again.

[Slurpee]

[flash]http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6566/picodayqw5.swf height=400 width=550[/flash]


imagine you're tom fulp


would you say this is excusable

if this was followed by a ~2-4 minute fight scene would you consider giving me $500 for it.


if not, what must be made better?

[VCRClock]

Fucking excellent. I'd explain how but I don't want to go into detail about every little thing I liked.

My only suggestions would be adding detail/"animation" to the grass as it changes underneath the running anticlocks, etc. That, and maybe making some of the vaguely diagonal lines in the Tree/Slurpee dialogue more horizontal.

[Slurpee]

My only suggestions would be adding detail/"animation" to the grass as it changes underneath the running anticlocks, etc.

dang it.


yeah, I wanted to see if I could get away with not doing that, but if it's noticeably absent, I guess I probably should.

That, and maybe making some of the vaguely diagonal lines in the Tree/Slurpee dialogue more horizontal.

I could actually do that whole background over, and I probably should.

Make it more professional-looking.


Thanks!

[PirateClock]

hahaah great!

haha that preloader ng made is fucking horrible

[GreyClock]

I would give you $500 for it as it is.

[TequilaClock]

Long time since a great SlurpeeClock movie

[Slurpee]

yesss okay great thanks guys

I'm pumped now {{{{}}}}
might even finish


also, yeah, the official preloader is such a boring circle-jerk taint poop

the last two years were these mostly radical fbf animations of pico doing back flips and totally shooting you in the face or whatever
now it's like... colored boxes being hit by lightning, and pictures of things that have nothing to do with pico

silly newgrounds.

[zl]

Stay pumped Slurpee!!  Seeing what you have is helping motivate me to do my own animations

[BobbyClock]

IF YOU DON'T FINISH

I DON'T HAVE A MOVIE TO MAKE

[Topcatyo]

That was awesome.  I loved the old game dialogue, and the movie was pretty funny.

[SpinningCubeClock]

Pretty swell! During the running scene like others said, add some detail to the grass, or maybe make the horizon slightly curved so we can see it actually move. You might also want to add some close ups in that bit seeing as it's just one long shot and if you have close ups, you may not need to add detail since it wont be on screen for as long.

[ArgoonKlok]

Earthbound graphic/audio references made me wet my pants in glee.

[Topcatyo]

Maybe add some epic lighting effects and whatnot?

[Pin Clock]

Great so far, Keep this up!

[LambdaClock]

pretty fucking epic man

[BlackberryClock]

keep going. As others said, it could use more fine details. I'd also say, reduce the volume on the text during the Earthbound (<3) scene.

[LuxenbergClock]

hahaha "OK."

[buttplug]

I think I transcended existence and became an entity of pure energy while watching that.

[LuigiClock]

work on the small details and you will win, remember that other guys want the money too and so, you need to go above and beyond to break through the dumbfucks who are anticlock as well.

[Slurpee]

update:


things are not going so well =(