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Farted by Topcatyo, March 22, 2009, 11:02:05 PM

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Topcatyo

Rather than make even more multiples about my little comic, I'll just update this one whenever.

Pimps up, hoes down.  Latest comic.

TorchClock

I loved it. This time round I seemed to like the mini comic better just because of it's pure hilarity.

Sinister Clock

All your jokes are stretched out waaay too much and you don't really put much effort into your art. I've seen you do better shit come on.

CaulkClock

Words words words words fonzie

Topcatyo

Quote from: torch;1545476I loved it. This time round I seemed to like the mini comic better just because of it's pure hilarity.
Yeah, I'm not the happiest about the main comic in the long run.  I'm going to do a much better on this time around.
Quote from: Sinister;1545484All your jokes are stretched out waaay too much and you don't really put much effort into your art. I've seen you do better shit come on.
Alright, I will :)

Sinister Clock

Read some books about comedy. I'm not being funny, it'll help.

Try to limit yourself down to 2-4 frames. You should only ever need 3 frames in a comic.

DingleberryClock

Reading a book about comedy is like listening to a book-on-tape about how to be a writer.

ActionClock

Quote from: Sinister;1545529Try to limit yourself down to 2-4 frames. You should only ever need 3 frames in a comic.

woah, what?? it's a webcomic, there aren't size limits, do what works. and what you have been doing is pretty great
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buttplug

Quote from: Sinister;1545529Read some books about comedy. I'm not being funny, it'll help.

Try to limit yourself down to 2-4 frames. You should only ever need 3 frames in a comic.

What the hell are you talking about. The small frame size we see in the papers are restrictions set by the papers themselves. I don't really think you have any idea what you are talking about. We aren't trying to make Garfield here.

Topcatyo

Quote from: Sinister;1545529Read some books about comedy. I'm not being funny, it'll help.

Try to limit yourself down to 2-4 frames. You should only ever need 3 frames in a comic.
Gotta agree with
Quote from: DingleberryClock;1545541Reading a book about comedy is like listening to a book-on-tape about how to be a writer.
Funny isn't something one can be taught.  I mean, a person can learn, but only by being exposed to funny things and wondering why it's so funny.
Also, while many comics prefer to have the three panel layout, it's not really the type of comic I do.  That's not to say one's better than the other, if both are pulled of well they can be funny, but if they're pulled off wrong, then, well, the result's obvious.  It's more up to the author and how they prefer to reach whatever joke they're intending to reach.

DWARFINATORclock

Quote from: Sinister;1545529Read some books about comedy. I'm not being funny, it'll help.

Try to limit yourself down to 2-4 frames. You should only ever need 3 frames in a comic.

Apparently it didn't help you. Also fuck the 2-4 frames thing, it's bullshit.

TabascoClock

That "graph novel" mini comic is funny :)

DingleberryClock

Any drama type comic you see in the paper is 2-3 times the length of the funnies anyway. And every now and then Garfield craps out a full page edition.

Heliopios

I thought comic #10 was hilarious
:]

Sinister Clock

Forget the book thing but seriously limit yourself to 2-4 frames just because you're stretching your comics out too much and making them unfunny seriously.

Topcatyo


Flounderpa

After reading it now I feel an urgency to Play Fire Emblem
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GodClock

i didn't know the fonz made a GIRL FIST
Sw@g
Quote from: Kodiakclock;1893997godclock probably now that I think about it. We could bro it out he could learn me how to surf and then we cruise bro our way out of there into brosville

Topcatyo

Quote from: GodClock;1551362i didn't know the fonz made a GIRL FIST
That way you get more knuckle into the punch when you hit the jukebox.
It's all in the fist.

peyoteclock

nothing says fun lighthearted webcomic like an essay written for each strip haha.

but yeah don't worry about it they are interesting.